Talk:Kihiro Moh Shrine

"If this is the first of the three Shrines Link visits, the Monk tells Link that two Shrines remain. If it is the second Shrine he visits, the Monk will tell him that one remains. If it is the third and final Shrine he visits, the Monk will tell him to go to Divine Beast Vah Naboris."

It feels extremely unwieldy and unnecessary to cover these like this. For one, it's complete overkill to cite every line of a monologue separately and paraphrase it -- why not either just give the passage outright, or summarize the actual gist of the thing and use one cite?

Secondly, the specific passage I quoted could so very, very easily be summarized as "the Monk informs Link of any remaining Shrines."

This style is all over the BotW articles, and I gotta say, as a reader it's a turn-off. It's not encyclopedic, it's clunky and hard to read. 06:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)