Talk:Sheikah


 * Archive 1

Storytelling Cleaned Up
I have cleaned up a lot of the storytelling in this article. I want to remove the story template. Please discuss. --Xizor 20:36, 2 November 2011 (EDT)
 * Why discussing something you already removed? Or are you expecting some congratulations? If no story filler is present, then just remove the template -- 03:12, 3 November 2011 (EDT)
 * Because others may disagree. What a rude remark. Anyway, good job, Cip. Glad this article doesn't waste our readers' time anymore. --Xizor 06:03, 16 November 2011 (EST)
 * K2L, there are definitely better ways of talking to other editors (especially since he was simply asking about his template removal, and would return it to the page if there was dissent), you for one, should know this! :( As for wasting readers' time, Chris did write a lot of applicable information and content with relevance. Put simply, his verbose writing style clouded the meaning of what should have been simple sentences. I restructured many of the sentences with run-ons and the article's layout, while maintaining the relevant intention Chris had in the first place. Ironically, the length of the article now is about as short as it was the moment before Chris struck a pen to it! 22:27, 18 November 2011 (EST)