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Is the content in the Story section from the manual or something? If it's not, it is ridiculously unencyclopedic and needs to be re-written. {{:User:Cipriano 119/sig}} 03:14, 22 July 2010 (UTC) | Is the content in the Story section from the manual or something? If it's not, it is ridiculously unencyclopedic and needs to be re-written. If it is in fact from the manual, can someone please provide some sort of sourcing? As it is, it is extremely unprofessional and reads like a casual conversation. {{:User:Cipriano 119/sig}} 03:14, 22 July 2010 (UTC) |